Example #1-
In my paper I stated how wells quotes, "If my life makes a difference in how people see lynching, if only by a small amount, then I would gladly give it up."
Example #2
I also state how Arsenault tells, "I don't know if the men that were sent to protect them would do so or feed them to the wolves."
These sources tell of the harshness that is prominent throughout the 2 essays and it will have a bigger impact, that is why I choose these for my report.
I really like your first quote it sounds great. Your second one is a little bit confusing, but I am sure if I read the rest of your paper I would be able to better understand it! It is important that we do not only state the quote but also to explain it!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jenna and I like your first comment, but you need a signal phrase and an interpretive comment. You also need the quote cited. I understand what you are trying to explain in the first one , but I would explain your second quote in more detail.
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