Thursday, November 17, 2011
Conference notes
After my conference with archibald I found that I have a few corrections to be made as well as a better understanding on how to write about my topic. I found that my topic was to wide of a span in between what I was writing about and what I was trying to argue. I didn't focus enough on arguing a topic that is debatable by others so much as argue a vague point, I will be doing some revamps on my paragraphs and focusing now more on a more arguable version of my topic.
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Many people have the same problems with their paper as you do. I dont have much to write in this comment because you didn't explain your paper, but keep working on your paper!
ReplyDeleteI had the same problem. I did not have a good argument so there was really no point to my paper. It was more of a biography than anything else, which is not the right direction at all. Also I was getting off the topic of race which is wrong. The conference really helped me to see the changes I needed to make, and also the changes you needed to make!
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ReplyDeleteI understand that you have too much of a wide range topic and need to condense it. Make sure that you really explain your new topic and how it connects to your old and new document on the lines of race. It will describe what you are discussin in your paper. Overall, you should be fine.