Wednesday, October 12, 2011
After reading this what do you think my paper is about?
In both the era's, when Ida B. Wells took up her fight in getting her ideas and opinions about race where she told the public just how unjust the justice system was and how badly her fellow African Americans were treated as well as when the freedom riders rode in a bus into the sourthern states in order to prove that both whites and blacks could get along as equals. In both times the topic of race for the most part has stayed the same. However the way they fought for their cause differred from the two times in history. Both Ida B. Wells and the freedom riders had simular thoughts and ideas but how they acted on these ideas was completely different.
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This is good, you are very clear as to what you are going to talk about throughout the rest of the paper. One spelling correction in the last sentence though, *similar. I hate to be a jerk, but its just constructive criticism:) Otherwise I think it looks excellent!
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Your point is very clear, but im confused about the first sentence because it is very long. Overall, I understand that the Freedom Riders were fighting to gain freedom for the blacks and that they should be treated as equals. Good paragraph.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction tells me exactly what your paper is going to be about. The comparison of Ida B. Wells and the Freedom Riders. You let me know that you are going to be discussing both the similarities and the differences. Also, give an explanations on the Freedom Riders Excerpt.
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